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Alphonse Elric - Fullmetal Alchemist

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It feels like its been a really long time since I've held a pencil.
Past few months have been a gray blur, I honestly cant remember what I did. At all.
Im still out of the loop and trying to get back. But even if I think about it, Im not able to act on it.
Serious malfunction in Mind-Body coordination, haha. 

Well, anyway, Ta Daa!!
I worked for 3 days on and off and finally here it is.
Its a bit messy and rusty but so am I. Hehe
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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

great job...the lines by themselves are wonderful, your sensitivity (skill)shows through the medium, your form comprehension is very solid (nice clearly defined geometry), understanding of light source (shadows), 3-D rendering... you could have emphasized the arm in front more by drawing the boundary contour line thicker...some artists do this to bring any line/object forward away from the others, this helps for emphasis of the "Z" planar projection... line weight used the figure is used either to emphasize a mass, light direction or for graphic interest...

you could have used more colors, this is a monochromatic piece, which basically is in grey scale(pencil), regardless if you used color pencil or a crayon... if you are uncomfortable using color, start with figure/ground relationships, color or paint the negative space behind the character, watercolors or markers,,, <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="22" height="24" alt=":meditate:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="22" title="Ninja meditate before battle..."/>